Just something I typed up while at work. I kinda like it - actually, I really like it. We'll see what else I can come up with using the idea of dancing in the rain.
I just love the imagery of dancing in the rain with your love. I've been tossing ideas around for a poem themed around dancing, and I've also always liked it when it rained. So the two ideas really clicked, for some reason. I churned this out a bit quicker than I would've liked, and I've tweaked it a bit since posting it (both reasons because I was closing the office when I finished it), but overall I really like the way it came out.
Constructive criticism is appreciated.